Love the voice acting and the animatic so far, but perhaps you should wait to upload until you have the final draft... rough drafts don't really belong in the art portal... good work otherwise!
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Very well done retro animation! The sprites are nicely done and the synchronization with the music is near flawless. However, the blending at the top of the sprites is a little strange and makes their hair look like it's fading into the background. The combination of bitcrushed noises and punchy stock noises also creates a bit of confusion. But overall, very nice animation C:
Thank you for reviewing. I used many weeks to make it.
Very cute, stylish animation. Love the expressions on Dan and Arin's faces, definitely a must-have for a GG animation. Overall very well done! If I had to make a minor critique, it would be that there are quite a few still frames in this animation that jar the comedy a little bit, but those are just minor nitpicks. Great work C:
I love the movement of the clouds and the shine on the rainbow water! The glare from the sun is also done very nicely. However, the movement with the clothes, the hair, and the wings feels a little static. To me, it looks like the wings and hair have just been skewed, tweened and rotated. More diverse frames would have allowed the hair and wings to really flow and flap. But those are relatively minor things in your loop, it is overall wonderful C:
Awesome emulation of the art style from the show! You did a great job making the animation look like the old Steamboat Willie cartoons. Keep it up! <3
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